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Runz Runz GOTTA Runz!

PostPosted: 05 Jun 2013, 23:05
by lucasds12
RUN
-Made by Lucas.
GOTTA RUN, BEFORE THE TERROR HAPPENS!
LALA, THE LION WENT "ROAR" AND SAW A MOUSE!
RUN, RUN! RUN, RUN BABY YOU GOTTA RUN!
JUST, JUST RUN! YEAH, YOU GOTTA RUN....!
WE CAN'T JUST STAND HERE AND WAIT FOR THE HORRIFIC MONSTERS COME (INCLUDING A LION)
RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!
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Hope you enjoyed, please leave a like and a comment, why do I keep on saying like???
:D
dzienny wrote:JUST END ALREADY WE HAD ENOUGH!

Ok :(, bye.
-Lucas

Re: Runz Runz GOTTA Runz!

PostPosted: 05 Jun 2013, 23:13
by HETAL
i like lions

Re: Runz Runz GOTTA Runz!

PostPosted: 05 Jun 2013, 23:17
by lucasds12
Lol, that's pleasant, very pleasant indeed ;)
-Lucas

Re: Runz Runz GOTTA Runz!

PostPosted: 05 Jun 2013, 23:24
by ismellike
This was my favorite line, it really brought out the meaning of the store.

lucasds12 wrote:RUN, RUN! RUN, RUN BABY YOU GOTTA RUN!

Re: Runz Runz GOTTA Runz!

PostPosted: 05 Jun 2013, 23:25
by Conor
This story brought tears to my eyes. Inspirational.

Re: Runz Runz GOTTA Runz!

PostPosted: 05 Jun 2013, 23:33
by lucasds12
ismellike wrote:This is my favorite line of this story:

lucasds12 wrote:RUN RUN RUN, BABY RUN!

Filled with inspiration ;)
-Lucas

Re: Runz Runz GOTTA Runz!

PostPosted: 05 Jun 2013, 23:46
by dzienny
It reads smoothly, it's emotional. It's a nice poem and I like it.

Re: Runz Runz GOTTA Runz!

PostPosted: 05 Jun 2013, 23:51
by lucasds12
Lol, thank you for your kind words Dzienny. I am a inspirational person and I am glad to prove the invalid and completely unknown subject about me, I am a emotional story maker and contributor in websites some time and decide to make stories in the Off-Topic section of forums and contributive articles and such.
-Lucas